Friday, December 7, 2007

Portfolio Reflection Letter Rough Draft

PSEC has been a new experience for me. I do not think I ever would have imagined learning this much. Even though I was learning at my high school and taking advances classes and passing with pretty good grades, I was not learning about myself. PSEC and Writing 101 has taught me about my writing process in ways that have helped me become a better, stronger writer.
I believe I have made a significant amount of progress since the beginning of this quarter. When I first arrived at PSEC, I was so used to the typical five paragraph essay format that had been pounded into my head for as long as I can remember, that I struggled with the first essay quite a bit. I had to relearn how to write essays to fit this new college format. So I have definitely progressed because I can now write something besides a typical high school essay. But I have also learned more about my writing style and my writing process. I do not think it has changed necessarily, but I now know what it is more and how to use that to my advantage.
After taking this class, I am more aware of the specific improvements that I need to make in my writing. I am still in the process of making those improvements and changes. One of the things I need to improve on is my time management. I have formed a horrible habit of procrastinating over the years. When I procrastinate I am not able to put as much into my essays and it usually does not give me enough time to edit everything to the extent that I would like. This is the main thing that has affected my writing. For example, in my first essay on Bacon’s rebellion I did not give myself enough time before to organize all my thoughts as much as I would have liked. So I ended up rushing through the rough draft so when I went to edit it for the final I almost completely rewrote it. Another thing I still need to improve upon is my introductions and conclusions. They usually end up being kind of boring and just there for the sake of having one. I need to work on making them interesting for the reader so that they will want to keep reading. I may have some things that I still need to improve but I also have some strengths that I have built upon in this class.
This class has helped me further develop some skills I already had. One of these skills is being able to work in a group. In our third essay when we worked in groups to write our essays I think I did a good job of contributing to the group and providing my thoughts and suggestions. I wrote my part of the essay on what we had agreed upon and got along with my group members well. Another strength I have in my writing is having clear views and being authoritative. In my Bacon’s rebellion essay I used direct quotes from my sources to clearly get my point across. I argued for my point and expanded on the quotes more in each paragraph. PSEC and Writing 101 specifically has helped me recognized these strengths and use them the best way possible.
Before PSEC, I was just like every other typical high schooler, taking all the basic classes and doing assignments to get by, not because I really cared. Now I am learning new things about myself and my work all the time, like how I learn and how I write. Also, I am being put in new situations that are changing me, I believe, for the better.

6 comments:

Craig McKenney said...

Megan,

This is probably my most favorite piece of writing that you have done this quarter. It is at the top of the list of reflection letters I have read today, and it is an amazing portrait of your thinking and learning this quarter.

Congrats!
-c

Carolyn said...

I absolutely love this reflection... it is amazing!

I wouldn't change a thing :D

TylerK said...

Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed this reflective essay. I thought you explained you did a good job explaining your improvements throughout this first quarter. Just like Carolyn said, I wouldn't change a thing (unless YOU see fit).

Seann said...

It was super good. Probably like Craig said, the best one I've read so far.

JordanMBeyer said...

Very nice, Very nice!
Fantastic work.
That's about all I have to say about this piece of work.

Desmond<3 said...

Daaaaaaayyyuuuuuuuuuum, Megan.

It was nice.
except I did notice a spelling error in the first paragraph....

advances classes = advanced classes?